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Soft green light
Hot night
Blurred sight
No fights
So right
It's humid
Big strong hands
A man
The chance
So tense
The room is fuming
Twisted sheets
So bold
So meek
Dreaming for weeks
It's heaven
Big thick haze
Hot gaze
The way
The end
But who ?
Not tellin'
Breathing, escaping, releasing, relating, adrenaline, sugar and sweat
Rhythm and gripping, gyrating and slipping, connected, addicted and wet.
A feeling, an instinct, a conquer, a killing, an outburst, a shout and a sigh
A climax, a coaster, the ground nearing closer, the end of the ride.....satisfied.
Feelings raw
Clenched jaw
Melting
Trembling
Who did it ?
You did
Soft green light
Hot night
Blurred sight
No fights
So right
It's humid.
Hot night
Blurred sight
No fights
So right
It's humid
Big strong hands
A man
The chance
So tense
The room is fuming
Twisted sheets
So bold
So meek
Dreaming for weeks
It's heaven
Big thick haze
Hot gaze
The way
The end
But who ?
Not tellin'
Breathing, escaping, releasing, relating, adrenaline, sugar and sweat
Rhythm and gripping, gyrating and slipping, connected, addicted and wet.
A feeling, an instinct, a conquer, a killing, an outburst, a shout and a sigh
A climax, a coaster, the ground nearing closer, the end of the ride.....satisfied.
Feelings raw
Clenched jaw
Melting
Trembling
Who did it ?
You did
Soft green light
Hot night
Blurred sight
No fights
So right
It's humid.
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Reby Jacob, 2005.
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excellent rhythm and use of words